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Dreamless nights slip into my slumber
I am lost in the night
The shadows that once cloaked me in comfort
Suffocate me until my screams die silently
Echoing like dying beats of a heart
As it is shattered and broken
Pieces scattering across the floor like glass

The mirror shakes 
As the music box plays on
Fading into the background
She dances in circles around me and mocks me with such glee
A crack in that plastered smile
Looking back at me
And my world begets
Anything other than the darkness 
So alone, even with you by my side
There is no where that hope can really reside
She just dances in circles around me and mocks me with such glee

-Christina Paul

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Date: 04/05/2011

By: Ian Glass

Subject: a small clip (experimental prose)

So here I indelibly mourn, to my knees I fall like Autumn bowls of silent sage, deep swelling sulfur mines of burning sage in the lighted chambers of my busted brain. I coin it for those lost wandering idiots, those who did nothing but die in the mud. But somehow I am lifted from this lethargic state, this multi-faceted outpouring, and flashed into the mended wind and fog so I can likewise project onto a thousand drawn canvases. I then procure this lamentation for those who needlessly covet the tangible gray forefront matter with wormy fingers. They follow the path of self-negation. And in the dithering dusk where the shadows amble to and fro on balanced timetables, I sniff in the poison of the world, undisciplined I guess, for the clouds come in so quick these days. Their pointless, strive-less bodies rub together, in the hearth with the worms. But where is the mirth for a radical soul? What’s in store for a very depraved, Bohemian soul? When will the precious stones be gathered together, into those pretty patterns? The misty chaotic tides cannot be erased but only in acquiescence responded to. And how will ones response be announced and then denounced and by what mouth will it be renounced, by what burning yew tree will we gaze at the blue-silvery eyes of mysterious sobriety, the eyes of Shiva. But here in the movement, preserved by the merciful arms of Brahma, I am a luminous root, printed or tattooed to the brain so sternly while the earth is just melting away. I can see the sun. It’s Lazarus chugging train-like miles to his heavenly position, and the moon is just waiting there plain-faced to shake hands, to kiss the sun with his crooked expression.

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Date: 04/07/2011

By: Gregory

Subject: Re: a small clip (experimental prose)

Your piece is very interesting... I enjoyed it.

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Date: 04/01/2011

By: Marcus

Subject: Things getting improved

Can someone please tell me how to make money through my writeups and jornal?

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Date: 04/02/2011

By: Lil

Subject: Re: Things getting improved

Create a successful blog and then add google ads for free!

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Date: 05/06/2011

By: Pinquil g.

Subject: Re: Things getting improved

It's all about winning contests. There's a bunch on line. You can go to the library too and check some out. The more you enter the more chance you have of winning =P eh? Try your best and keep practicing! Base your stories off something important to you and they'll have a greater impact. Ask advice. Ask your English teacher. Check up on pieces that won competitions. Well, that's all! *.* Good luck!

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Date: 02/26/2011

By: Pinquill girl

Subject: XD

Sooo cool~I was wondering what was gonna happen next! I like the part where you say "I would have thought I was beating time itself!" Nice imagery.

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Date: 02/19/2011

By: Jane Sanong

Subject: Hi!

Helloooo everyone! I'm JANE! I love to write and I'm excited to share my writing with you!!!

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Date: 02/13/2011

By: Himedal

Subject: Well-done

Hi Molly. I really enjoyed this poem. Well-done.

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Date: 02/17/2011

By: Molly

Subject: Re: Well-done

which one?

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Date: 12/28/2010

By: Jerry

Subject: Top Contributors

Mysterious "Molly" figure jumps up to second place!

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