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Dreamless nights slip into my slumber
I am lost in the night
The shadows that once cloaked me in comfort
Suffocate me until my screams die silently
Echoing like dying beats of a heart
As it is shattered and broken
Pieces scattering across the floor like glass

The mirror shakes 
As the music box plays on
Fading into the background
She dances in circles around me and mocks me with such glee
A crack in that plastered smile
Looking back at me
And my world begets
Anything other than the darkness 
So alone, even with you by my side
There is no where that hope can really reside
She just dances in circles around me and mocks me with such glee

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Date: 12/01/2012

By: Ltout

Subject: The Staff

“Give me your lunch money punk” Dez demanded.
I was being held upside-down again for the third time this week by that big and I mean BIG jerk, Dezmond Karonie the 3rd. But we call him Dez because other-wise were toast.
“Well it’s already fallen on the floor so if you let me go” I said hopefully. “Deal” Dez rumbled. “Ow” I muttered as he dropped me on my head.
I, Carter, was an average 8th Grader. With too big sneakers, ripped jeans, a T- shirt, and shaggy hair.
“Here it is but me mom will kill you for it.” No she won’t because you won’t tell her.”
RING RING

I was saved by my old companion the lunch bell.
“Saved for now” he said as he ran off laughing. If there’s one thing Dez likes more than bullying its food. Well long story short I made it through the day safely (except for algebra,) and at the end of the day when Dez caught up to me at the bus stop.
“I said ‘for now’, Rat.”
“It’s C-a-r-t-e-r Car-ter, go-.”
“Don’t tempt me, or else.”
“And what is ‘or else’”.
“You know what.” He said shaking a meaty as he ran to catch the bus.

“Got to go mom, love ya!” I yelled as I ran out the door.
Hello, my name is Kathrin Sadie Lee, and I am part wiz- oohh never mind let’s get back to the story.
Anyways I ran out the front door, and as I ran to the bus stop I caught a glimpse of the weird kid Carter, I think, who lives down the street.
Any who when I got to school Mallory (a popular girl) was waiting for me at the doors. “You should have agreed to my … deal.”
The deal was that if I was her friend she could access my large sum of money (thanks to my mom.) I always said no.
As I ran to my classroom I muttered “no thanks.” I was running to gym when… uhh.

Algebra. I hate algebra, Carter thought. But I had studied hard. So I started running to algebra when… “ow”
“It’s Kathrin right?” I said as I recognized her as the girl who lives down the street.
“Yeah” she answered back rubbing her head. “Aren’t you Carter?”
“Yeah” I replied. “What’s the rush?”
“Ms. Orth, you know the new history teacher.”
“Really, me too, sadly.”
RING RING
“Let’s go we” both said together.
History was just as boring as usual.
“Blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah

Blah.” History was so boring that I almost fell asleep, and I would’ve if it wasn’t for Carter (Who kept poking me.) I thought about my cat at home, she is gray and has beautiful green eyes.
The teacher had just started our homework assignment. There was a rumbling, and the ceiling came down.
Just as everyone had calmed down a strange man in a suit drifted down into the classroom and asked.
“Who took the Box?” and looked around.
I was shaking, for I knew this man, I had stolen from him, I had the box.

“Hay Kathrin did you feel that earthquake earlier today, that was pretty cool.”
“Yea about that.”
“Go on.”
“I’ll tell you on the bus, K.”
Well later on the bus Kathrin pulled me to the last seat on the bus then she took out her walking stick that she always that carried around with her, and sort of drew a rainbow in the air.
“Why did you just wave your staff in the air like that?” I asked.
“It’s a staff, and to make sure no ones eavesdropping.”
“So you mean like a wizard staff?” I inquired.
“So as to not get into the details, I shall say it simply. Yes, oh, and F.Y.I. there was no earthquake today.”

So, I told him every thing. I finished with, “come over to my house right after you drop your backpack at home.”
He seemed strangely calm about the whole magic thing.
So, right after we had gotten off the bus, he was ringing the doorbell.
My robot butler, James opened the door to show Carter’s solemn face.
“My grandpa died yesterday, his funeral is tomorrow.”
“Well,” I said, “I may have something that will cheer you up.” “James, go get him…?”
“Lemonade.”
“Yes, on it Master Carter.” He responded in a robot voice.
“Did he just call me, Master Carter?”
“Yeah, I programmed him to do that.” I said, hoping I wasn’t blushing. “Anyways, the Box. Yea, yea, The Box.” I said leading him down the hall to a room with signs on the door saying “Caution,” “Danger,” Etc.

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Date: 11/21/2012

By: My dream

Subject: Random

Life and death
By Jordon wood


Isn't life a funny thing ? How it can be so great , so perfect one day and then the next everything just falls.
Well that's my life for ya.
I was born into a very dysfunctional home my father was a drunk/druggie .
My mother never seemed to give a shit. My father never was around and when he was it was just to use my mother. despite my upbringing I've always been a pretty optimistic kid.I loved to pretend and aspire all day long. I often liked to pretend that I was a detective. Detective buster I called myself because I was always bustin baddies. Heh yep that was me but the fun all ended one day when my father burst into my house drunk off his ass. I was currently in the middle of solving the great panda case when my father noticed me. "WHARR YA DOIN YA LIL BITCH" he yelled "nothing sir" I yelped suddenly scared "I was just playing detective buster". Detective whaa he replied with a dangerous tone " it's nothing I said it's just a game that I play. Oooh he mocked ann how exactly do you play that.
Now excited and not sensing his
mockery went into a spirited explanation of detective buster and his various adventures " I'm going to be the bestest detective one day and everyone will be excited when they see me they'll say " look everyone there's detective jordon buster he's the greatest I smiled widely at the thought. I snapped out of my bliss when my father began to laugh. I gave a confused look. "You little dumbass" he roared " you're so stupid he paused for a few seconds then continued kid you'll find out soon that all of your dreams are dumb and they will never come true you will NEVER be detective blazer.
"buster" I corrected him sadly as a tear rolled down my cheek I silently walked to my room as my dream slowly died.
I never played detective buster again

10 YEARS LATER
I am 16 years old now it's been a ride to get here I've been through a lot since that day but I'm proud to say though I may have been wounded by my fathers words I never let it own me. I go to mount Dora high school where I keep an above average GPA and I have had a job since I turned 16 as a matter of fact I recently received a promotion due to my hard work I also have an amazing girlfriend named Haley we've been dating for about a year now and I love her very very much she and my little sister Elisabeth keep my life perfect I love them both more than life.
As you know in every story there is a low point a part of the story where something happens to the protagonist that completely changes the entire plot. as you might have guessed this is that part now on a normal day I would've had this schedule
• wake up
•drive to Haley's house
• drive to school with Haley
• get breakfast at school with Haley
• finish school day
• drive Haley home
• kiss Haley goodbye
• drive to pick up Elisabeth
• go to work
• go home
• put on nicer clothes
• go on a date with Haley

You see on a normal day I would've done that stuff but today ladies and gents was no normal day today was Haley's 16th birthday and I had been planning for it for weeks saving and plotting until it hurt and now it was show time.
Now I could go into serious detail but I'm going to make it short.
The day started when I picked Haley up in the morning holding all of Haley's favorite breakfast foods in my hands and a dozen birthday balloons with catchy sayings written
on them. Then it progressed to a small surprise party that I'd organized in our favorite teachers room which included cake/presents/teddy bear fights and all of her friends . And don't even get me started on her face when I told her that we were going to her favorite restaurant for dinner.
On the way to the restaurant Haley decided that she needed to get a pair of earrings that she left at my house so I stopped there. When we arrived I suggested that I would go look and she could play one of the CDs that I got her while I looked. no she replied I think that we should both go in and split up. To which I responded "baby I never want to split up with you" in a gooey romantic voice. You're so corny she giggled. In the end it was decided that my plan was in good interest and I went to find the earrings. After 5 minutes of searching and destroying my room I finally found Haley's earrings. Yess I cheered triumphantly as I made my way to the door. Right as I turned the handle I heard a voice yell " WHERE DO YOU THINK YERR GOIN" it was my mom. Out I replied irritated that she was keeping me away from Haley. No you're not there's some crazy man near here shooting people. I ignored her as to this is how she normally spoke when she was wasted. Whatever I said as I opened the door and left. You see at the time I didn't know it but for once my mom was actually truthful she may have been very drunk but she was also very correct there was in fact a man who had recently robbed a bank and was killing everyone he came in contact with. Looking back now what I wish I'd done that night was got Haley out of the car gave her a big long kiss and let her spend the night at my house because If I had she would still be alive today.

I walked to my car and smiled as I saw Haley trying to dance to one of her favorite songs. What took you so long babe she asked still dancing like a total lunatic. Are you kidding me I asked these tiny things are a pain in the ass to find I tossed them to her grinning and she grinned back. well she teased maybe I should thank you she said as she got closer. Maybe you should i agreed smiling widely at the thought of the upcoming kiss. Come and get it dork she joked. "happy birthday baby" I said as I bent over to give her a nice long kiss. Well I guess we should get going she said after a few seconds
..... Oh um yeah to the uh ... Restaurant. Haha she giggled as we climbed into the car and headed to our destination.

You look distant Haley stated as we drove towards the restaurant what's on your mind ? Oh it's nothing really just my moms drunken nonsense that's all I answered. Her fun birthday face converted to the face she gets when she gets worried and motherly. Oh my god will your sister be okay ? she asked with parental curiosity. Yes she's at my grandmas tonight she'll be fine I assured her. Her face relaxed a little but still maintained a little worry to it "what about your mom she asked ".
I took one of my hands and wrapped it all around hers " listen everything's fine it's your birthday and that is all that matters I want everything to be perfect and that isn't possible if you're busy worrying so promise me you will stop worrying. I looked at her for a second and saw she was smiling. Ok I promise baby I will relax and enjoy my amazing birthday dinner. I smiled back I love you I breathed she leaned over and kissed me on the cheek making me blush I love you too.
We arrived at the restaurant
It was a pretty pricey place that was 3 story's tall and served 4 star food it took me a lot of doing to get a reservation at this place but thanks to my never give up attitude I eventually gathered the $1,234 to afford it I know what you're thinking damn jordon all of that for some girl well let me tell you something mister it wasn't just some girl this was the girl that I'd met in the worst of times and she still wanted to be my friend this is the girl that I waited on head and foot just because she told me she ALMOST tripped earlier this was the girl that I one day intended to marry
Do you know that feeling when you go to your favorite amusement park and you think about all the good times you ever had at that amusement park and you get so excited about it that you cant stop moving and singing and dancing then you get there and you're so happy that it's almost like magic and all of the terrors of life just fade away. Well that's the way I always feel when I'm around Haley she's my amusement park.
Anywho me and Haley had a wonderful time the food was amazing the music was eloquent and the romantic mood was definitely set as we left hand in hand I was disappointed that I didn't have a ring to propose. Jordon she said dreamily as she turned to me. I want to thank you for everything tonight has been so amazing and perfect I just love you so much. I smiled warmly at her you don't have to thank me a replied it's your birthday and its not over yet I have one last gift for you at one of our favorite places. I leaned over to give her one of my I love you more than air lingering kisses and our lips met for The last kiss we would ever share then together we climbed into the car an headed to our destination.

We were once again driving in my car listening to one of Haley's new CDs .
In my head our destination was the old windmill by the meadow where we shared our first date/picnic but apparently fate had a different plan for us. So you can imagine my surprise when a small red Subaru slammed Into my car.
I blacked out for about 20 seconds
And when I came to I was faced with the horrible sight of my loved one passed out possibly dead against the airbag. I felt a rush of panic and despair fill my mind. I worked quickly to undo my and her seat belts "Haley Haley Haley " I called in a panicky tone while shaking her. Then my brain doubled over to all the crime shows I'd ever seen and I put two fingers on her neck to check her pulse. A feeling of hope and excitement washed over me as I realized she had a pulse. "Jordon "? She said groggily trying to lift her head . I gently pushed her back and then replied relax sweetie we had an accident but you're going to be okay I was saying this more to myself because I had just noticed a large trickle of blood run down her forehead . I tried starting the car but my hopes were crushed after a minute of trying the car was dead. I realized that I would have to run her to the hospital my mind railed the nearest hospital was about 3 miles away " I can do this I told myself " so I picked up Haley best i could and began to to jog.

I didn't get far before a large gun was pointed at my head.
I stopped he was a man in about his mid 30s and he had a disgruntled expression he was clean shaved with wild short hair that seemed to want to be everywhere at once. Look I don't know what you want but I've got $54 in my pocket you ca... "SHUTUP" he interrupted you dumb fuckin kid you ruined my escape car suddenly I heard it the police cars in the distance, a spark of hope if I could hold off for just five more minutes I could save Haley. Listen man I bargained I know a bit about cars it just looks like your engine shorted out I could make it take you somewhere between 20 and 30 more miles. He gave me one last angry look then agreed. If there were ever a time I was thankful for working at a car shop it was that moment. i wasn't just stalling when I told him that his engine shorted out I had actually seen it before and had payed attention to how to fix it. I knew I couldn't make the guy wait long so I worked hard to create the solution that I had promised and before I knew it I was done. Done I said anxiously he came over and looked at his car "start it" he demanded I did as he asked I opened the car door twisted the keys and the ever so delightful hum of the Subaru engine greeted my ears. Not bad kid he mused the police now less than a minute away I sighed and began to walk Towards Haley who was now struggling to stand up " but" he continued I now have a chance of getting caught thanks to you and you're gonna have to pay for that this should occupy those cops for a few more minutes then the thing he did next will haunt me for the rest of my life he lifted his gun pointed it at Haley and pulled the trigger and at that precise moment my world stopped my skin felt dead I started to forget to breathe my heart started to pound harder and harder then I began to black out but just before I was gone I heard myself utter three words -" I love you"


..... I woke up in what appeared to be a hospital I was linked up to a heart monitor I saw X-ray sheets hung next to my bedside apparently whoever they belonged to had broken 2 ribs. I then noticed a sheet of paper on a bed stool nearby I reached to grab it then skipped to read the status it read
( heart attack) then I read the top and noticed that my name was on this paper I had broken 2 ribs I had a heart attack my heart monitor went crazy as it all came rushing back. I choked back tears then tried to sit up. A wave of pain greeted me and I quickly lied back down. A nurse hurriedly entered the room. Are you alr... "WHERE'S HALEY" I interrupted once again close to tears she looked confused at first but then a grim knowing look crossed her face." WHERE IS SHE" I screamed tears rolling down my face.
We we .. We tried to save her she stammered. "WHAT" I sobbed "WHERE IS SHE" WHERE IS SHE". The nurse frowned " she's dead she replied gravely". I completely lost it I burst into a waterfall of tears and wails "NO NO NO I sobbed as 6 nurses attempted to sedate me " SHE CAN'T BE DEAD SHE CAN'T BE" I slowly began to grow tired as the nurses settled me down into a flat sleeping position and I started accept that even if my bones may heal I would never overcome the pain of my broken heart.

Through the next couple months I was told by my doctor that I was healing greatly in an amazing amount of time but if this were true I didn't notice I felt half dead all through. I spent most of my days crying and mourning. I attended Haley's funeral a week after her death it was an open casket ceremony. I stood and have a speech about how everyone that knew Haley had loved her and I described all of my most favorite things about her bringing tears to her relatives and myself in the process
"I know that she is in a better place now because she was the most kind hearted and inspiring person I have ever met" I had said. That day I left with eyes full of tears feeling more miserable than ever because for the first time ever I knew for Sure that Haley was gone.
On the 3rd month my doctor strongly suggested that I start jogging three times a week to get myself in full health. I tried to shake it but my grandmother insisted that I do as the doctor said. So I began to jog Mondays / Tuesdays and Thursdays .
I clearly remember the day that I made the most spontaneous and dark decision of my life. It all started as I was jogging through my grandmothers neighborhood I had headphones on and was listening to various love songs thinking of all my good times with Haley when my skin grew cold I took off my headphones because I found it odd that on a hot day like this I could get this peculiar cold feeling it stopped for a moment and right as I was about to forget it even happened it came again and this time it came with a vision a thought that I hadn't even thought of again until now. It was a face but not just any face , it was his face it was the face of the man that had taken it all from me the cold feeling intensified as I gained feelings of hatred and rage my body began to shake as I realized that none of this was my fault this was all his fault he killed her he took her away from me and now he had to pay , now he had to DIE.
I ran home to grab the keys to my new ford and then headed to my cousins house.
My cousin is a bit of a meat headed jock and is always pressing me to build up my body
"Bout time little dude" he raved helping me load weights into my truck I walked over to the ab cruncher and unsuccessfully tried to lift it up.
He helped me lift it into the truck
" geez cuz you sure seem into this are you going for some serious killer muscles " he grinned. I flashed him a knowing smile "yeah something like that". For the next 3 month I pushed my body to its limits I pressed and pressed until I wanted to pass out and then I pressed more , every time I wanted to quit I just thought of that bastard and what he'd done then I would feel a surge of hatred flow through my veins like a disease giving me what seemed like unlimited strength. I decided that it would also be useful to know some fighting too so I began to study the most basic form at a local boxing club. There I picked up the basics fast and was quickly invited to jump in the ring but after a few weeks I realized that while boxing was an amazing way to start it was too restrained to teach me how to kill so I turned to the Internet and thoroughly studied human anatomy and pressure points and after a few days I had finally completed my transformation from timid teenager to what I considered a lethal killer I was now ready to face my foe all I needed to do now was track him down.
They say that everyone leaves a trace on the Internet somehow but you just gotta know the right guy to find it or in my case the right girl.

Her name is grace Alcott and when it comes to technology she was a genius. I knew her through Haley they were best friends since 7th grade and when Haley and I got together we became good friends as well.
I knocked on her front door and her mother answered then kindly pointed me towards graces room. I knocked with a dukes of hazard rhythm and was greeted by graces smiling face. She rushed over to hug me smelling like cinnamon and potato chips. "JORDON" she blurted "hey grace" I replied as I pulled away from her what's up. What's up with me she asked what's up with you ? She gave me an nervous look like she'd been dreading this moment. I've been keeping myself busy i said pointing to my brand new muscles. It's been hard I continued but I guess I'm trying to adjust. She paused as if processing what I had just said then sighed
"that's great jordon I'm glad you're ok" . Normally I would've simply ignored the fact that grace was hiding something from me but today was different , if something was bugging her I had to resolve it before I asked her to do anything for me. "What's wrong" I asked.
she looked stunned "what" she replied nervously. Well I pressed you sound as if you were expecting me to not be alright so why ? I don't know what you mean she stammered shyly.
I looked her in the eyes "grace" I said softly I can tell when you're lying to me. She gave a look of resignation well there is this one thing she mumbled quietly. What is it I pushed. She paused as if she were reconsidering her choice to tell me. "Grace" I exclaimed "tell me"
She put on a sad face then answered people have been saying things jordon they've been saying that you've went crazy and that you're suicidal. I took in what she just said looking back I'll admit that the thought had crossed my mind a few times but I never took it seriously I looked at grace taking her in thinking about how to reply. I flashed her a playful grin. Grace look at me do I look crazy to you ? and I'm definitely not suicidal did you seriously believe those people I asked faking a laugh.
She smiled and let out a relaxed sigh. Yeah she laughed I guess I was just being stupid I'm just glad that you're ok. I faked another laugh nope nothing's wrong with this guy I exclaimed. So she asked what did you come over for ? Well I replied it's nothing really I've just been working on a little project is all and I need your help. " my help" ? she asked stunned. Yep I answered as I reached into my backpack producing a sheet of paper with the information that I had gathered I need to find the address for this person I announced. Graces curious grin changed into a suspicious frown. She looked over the papers and then at me. What's this for jordon she asked in a tone that suggested that she was onto me. I suspected this would happen grace Lynn Alcott is many things she is fickle/silly/unorganized/ scatterbrained and mentally weak when it came men but she WAS NOT stupid and I could tell from the look she was giving me that she saw right through me. An old friend I've been trying to track down I said in a confident tone. Did you try Facebook she frowned clearly not convinced. Well he isn't the technological type I replied. She paused thinking of how to respond I don't know jordon she said grimly I don't want you getting into any sort of trouble. "What" I said Gracie I'm just trying to find a friend of mine I need your help please I begged. She could sense my desperation and had already made her choice "no jordon" I can't help you I'm sorry you should go. I could practically feel my chance slipping as she urged me to the door. I decided that I had no choice but to go to my last resort. "GRACE" I exclaimed. "What" she snapped
I looked her in the eyes once again and then proceeded to do the same thing any guy did to grace when he was charming her. look you are the smartest girl I know and I really need you to do this for me. this person is very important to me and I can't find him without your help so will you please help me ? I then gave her my most warm inviting smile it was a smile that had gotten me many friends and at the same time I pushed a few loose strands of hair behind her ear.
Her breathing became more shallow then she gave me an enthusiastic nod letting me know that what I had done obviously worked but was it the right thing to do ?
It took grace a total of 7 minutes to find my guy she then printed me out directions then Before i knew it i was thanking her and on my was on my way.

"Bryson Andrews" the name rang in my ears like a sonic boom as I muttered it to myself for the first time. After about an hour of driving I pulled up to a shady 3 story apartment complex I looked at the directions grace gave me. Apartment c56 third floor I thought "fantastic" I made my way up to the apartment then stopped at my destination "his apartment" I knocked. About a minute later a really skinny guy with long shaggy hair and a distant expression answered the door. He was wearing a Walmart shirt with what I hoped were ketchup stains on it. Is Bryson Andrews here ? I asked. The guy flashed me a confused look he thought for a moment like I'd just asked him to answer a trigonometry question then he got a remembering look on his face and replied oh no dude he moved to another side of town. I frowned do you have an address I pressed. He smiled then frowned again uhh umm ... Oh wait I remember he mused I grinned expecting triumph , no I don't have an address he exclaimed . I was really close to decking this guy in the face when he finally said but I do know where you might find him. "Where I said desperately" he thought for a moment " it's a district called easterland or that's what they call it anyway. I was 75% of the way down the stairs when I heard him yell "WAIT YOU FORGOT MY PIZZA" to which I muttered " damn crackhead"

After 30 minutes if searching I finally found this "easterland" and all I can say is it was the most terrifying place that I'd ever been. For starters the streets were covered in things that I can't and won't even describe it seemed that a fight broke out every 2 minutes and u swear that most of the women were dudes. Despite my horror I asked EVERYONE if they knew where Bryson Andrews was and apparently the guy was not only a dirtbag but a well known one because everyone gave me the same location- miles&james railroad .

After some very useful googling on my iPod I discovered that miles&james railroad wasn't very far from where I was and it was abandoned I felt myself getting excited as I headed towards my final destination.
I was staring at the sign stating that I was on the property of miles&james railroad and suddenly my excitement turned to hatred and anger as I thought of Bryson Andrews and what he'd done to me what he'd done to US. Then I saw something that made a whole new wave of murderous rage wash over me standing 27 feet away from me was Bryson Andrews .
I couldn't believe my eyes , right in front of my face was the devil himself. I guess In my head I thought that he would have shown some signs that he at least regretted what what he had done , maybe it would've shown in his eyes maybe he would've looked like crap out of stress but no the bastard actually looked better than he did the first time he was cleanly shaven wore nice new clothes and to top this cake of hatred that I was speedily building he had a cocky little gleam in his eyes that seemed to say " come and get me you little bitch" and that's where i totally lost it
I forgot everything and charged him.
My guess is that when he saw a 16 year old kid charging at him screaming "YOU BASTARD" his first thoughts were somewhere between " what the hell " and " bring it on " but I'm 100% sure that when I gave him my most powerful right hook to his face any confidence that he had changed to cautious fear.
He grabbed his cheek and staggered then a fierce look crossed his face
I suppose in my fantasies I thought he would simply give up as soon as I attacked him I thought he wouldn't put up a fight , boy was I wrong. He came back at me with a punch to the face similar to my own and followed up with an uppercut to my stomach and then he finished with a hard shove causing me to tumble over on my back hitting my head on the ground. "That's right you little shit" he gloated daddy knows a thing or two about fighting . I felt a warm liquid run down my mouth and I knew from the pain that it was blood. I wiped it off with my hand then took a Muhammad Ali fighting stance. He backed up a bit realizing that I too might've known what I was doing. He roared defiantly and charged me throwing a strong jab I dodged then countered with two jabs of my own I proceeded to him letting my anger take hold. I grabbed his head and dragged him downwards so that he was bent over facing the ground next I lifted my knee swiftly catching him in the nose with a disturbing crunching sound. He grunted in pain as a gush of red ooze spewed from his nostrils. I lifted him up and made Sure that he was balanced then delivered a powerful kick to his chest sending him spiraling into a nearby tree. he grunted in even more pain struggling to get up as I trudged casually over to his location. I took him in with a smile. I was so pleased with myself at the moment that I almost didn't notice him reach for a long steel bar. He swung the bar at me narrowly missing my leg "STAY BACK" he growled obviously scared of me now as he got up .I gave him a taunting grin as I walked closer to him he backed up and swung again but this time I caught the bar in my hand I ignored the pain now raging through my arm as I swept my leg underneath him knocking him back to the ground. "Now" I said to him in a dangerously evil tone I'm going to talk to you for a few minutes and I need you to

listen. He struggled to get away from me while calling me every name in the book so I grabbed his left leg extended it then brought my foot down on the bone as

hard as I could. I felt a sickening snap and knew that I had broken his leg. I stared emotionless as he produced a piercing wail and began to bawl . Now I asked calmly do you remember me ? "FUCK YOU MAN" he sobbed. Wrong answer I replied as I grabbed his other leg and once again brought my leg down hard on the bone thus breaking it as well. He wailed once again and started to cry even more pathetically so I decided to give him a minute to calm down. After a minute went by he had relaxed slightly as I thought he would. Do you remember me ? I asked again irritated from the wait. He did his best to study me and then a look of shock turned to a look of pure terror
as he recognized me.
You you yyoure that kid he stammered look kid I'm I'm sorry about your girlfr... "STOP" I roared he went silent. I don't care if you're sorry I don't care if you beg I don't if It haunts me for the rest of my life I want you !DEAD! To my surprise he didn't have another meltdown as I suspected. Well then he breathed shakily then I guess you'll need "THIS" he screamed as he hastily pulled out a gun and pointed it at me. He pulled the trigger and I dodged to the left leaving his bullet to fly into the distance. I extended my leg to kick his hand sending the gun skidding into a tree where it discharged once more hitting nothing. I kicked my foe in the face causing a fresh gush of blood the flow from his nose. Then I walked to retrieve his gun. I was nearly delighted to find that this gun was the same gun that had taken Haley but the gun also had an aura to it that was so evil that I hesitated to pick it up. It felt warm in my hands despite the freezing temperature threatening to overtake me. I checked the clip. One bullet left I thought to myself . I trudged back over to my victim and cocked the gun.
" normally" I sighed as i aimed the gun at Bryson's head I would ask if you had any final words but frankly I don't give a shit. I put my finger on the trigger and once again Bryson let loose with a series of pathetic childlike sobs. I began to squeeze the trigger when I caught a glimpse of the mans eyes it was only for a second but in that second I felt as if I could see the mans entire life and that's when I realized that I couldn't possibly kill Bryson Andrews because Bryson Andrews was already dead.
I fired the gun into the ground next to him then tossed the gun into a small pond nearby.
Listen I said softly to Bryson I'm not going to kill you Oh thank you thank yo.. "BUT I interrupted I'm going to call you some help. He processed this then realized that this would mean he was going to prison. He began to complain but I payed him no attention as I began to use his shirt to wipe off my phone and press the reset button then I dialed 9-1-1 when the operator answered and asked me my emergency I simply replied emotionlessly "come pick up your trash" then hung up dropped my phone and left the bane of my existence screaming in the distance.

On my way back to my car I got thirsty and decided to stop for a coke at the store I was least likely to find trouble at. I took my newly acquired beverage outside to drink and as I took my first sip and for a split secondI could've swore that I saw grace staring at me from a distance. No I told myself its just guilt and stress talking. I drank my drink for another 6 minutes to wait and see if the cops would show and when they did I glumly climbed into my truck and started to drive.

I didn't know where I was going I just didn't want to go home I couldn't bear to face my grandmother after what I'd done. After a couple hours of driving/self conflict and pure unbridled grief I came across a hill overlooking the open sea so I decided to stop and think there.
I climbed out of my truck and walked to the hill and sat. I looked down and noticed that it wasn't a hill but rather a cliff. I thought of every last moment I spent with Haley and realized that I would never forget today and I would never forget her they would both haunt me for the rest of my life. ..... Unless I thought to myself .... I stood up and took a step towards the edge then another one more i thought and it will all be over I began to take my first step to god when I heard "NOOOO" I tried to take a step back but I lost my footing and slipped.
I started to fall when a hand grabbed mine at the last second.
It was grace looking terrified as ever
She struggled to pull me up.
We both lay a few feet from the edge breathing manically. After a few minutes grace smacked me hard in the face giving me a bruise that would later turn into a black eye
"HOW COULD YOU" she sobbed
Look grace I'm sorry about using you it was wro... NOT THAT she interrupted I mean how could you try to do something so stupid .... She choked up attempting to hold back what I guessed were a tributary of tears. I'm sorry I mumbled not sure if
I meant it or not.
"SORRY" she snapped "SORRY"
YES I screamed I'M SORRY IS THAT WHAT YOU WANT TO HEAR, NO she screamed back
THEN WHAT GRACE WHAT
I don't know she sobbed.
We both went silent.
I'm sorry for screaming I mumbled
Look the reason that I did it I mean the reason I wanted to was because
There's no point anymore without her I'm nothing I have no purpose no reason to live I frowned pathetically.
She was quiet then she replied yes you do. Like what I argued.
She was quiet again as if she was trying to piece together her words
Then finally she said " before I met you and Haley I was always alone with my dad gone and my mom always at work I had no one then I met you guys and everything changed suddenly I had lots of friends but none of them like you guys. You two were so nice to me and you were always there whenever I was down you and Haley always picked me up. Soon you guys weren't just my friends but my family. When Haley died I was just as devastated as you were I couldn't sleep I couldn't eat I could barely remember how to talk. Then a few months later when I heard you might be suicidal I became so sad that my mom actually had to put me in therapy and I had to start taking meds. She paused and then began to cry once again "don't you see jordon she sobbed I've already lost one of my family I couldn't bear to lose another. I was silent. And I'm not the only one who couldn't live without you she continued. Who else I said with a hoarse voice close to tears myself. " your sister she stated what do you think would happen if she lost you. I thought of how our grandmother already had cancer and by her definition she could literally relapse any day and then I thought of how my sisters life would be if my grandmother died. Images flashed in my mind of group homes and other horrible possibilities. I suddenly hated myself how could I have thought of doing this how could I have risked my life just over some grudge I was so angry now at myself at Bryson Andrews at the world I felt trapped so I did the only thing I felt I could do I put my head down and broke into tears. Moments later I felt grace wrap me in a hug. It's getting cold out she stated we should go. How did you find me I whispered. She looked down embarrassed I hid in your trunk
. I smiled ,all the way I asked
Well she replied I had to cab to the apartments but I jumped in the trunk when you were at that crackheads door. How did you know he was a crackhead I said laughing.
I heard you say it she giggled.
What else did you see I asked.
Well she answered I saw you talking to at least 12 weirdos and 7 he-she's
I saw you kick the shit out of the asshole who killed Haley and then I saw you buy a coke. I took this in so I did see you then I mused. We laughed together for a couple minutes. So I said its getting cold out we should go that's what I said she complained
I offered her my arm she took it and I led her to the car and together we drove off to continue our journey through life.

Date: 09/06/2012

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Date: 07/07/2011

By: Alex Rush

Subject: Hi/Help!!

Ok, two parts to this. First part is hi. I'm Alex. I really love writing, second only to art, and I'm looking forward to posting more of my stuff on this site. I mostly write realistic fiction, and most of my stories are somewhat dark. I might try my hand at poetry a few times, but don't expect much. ;) I also have a slightly annoying habit of posting little notes in front of everything I write-I'm working on that.
Second part is a question-I submitted a bunch of short stories yesterday, but only one of them has been posted. Does the site only let you submit one story per day?

Date: 05/22/2011

By: Quill Writer

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Date: 05/12/2011

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